Can't wait to see the finished work

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WOW! You have something AMAZING here Losmios! Can't wait to see the exquisite end!

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All I can say is good job, and perhaps you should have a bit more weight down at the bottom.

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the lighting is exquisite... almost perfect infact. The patches of trees do look like... little forests, though they could also be where the sun has broken through clouds- but the fact that you have made the textures different makes them look much more like trees.

The ropes need to be distressed a bit more- perhaps make them look more worn. They look too new at the moment- perhaps make the neck tope a little longer and frayed at the end...

The frayed ends of the rope make it look like there was a struggle- and the pegasus won.

Hmmmm... hope that is of some help.
Your effort in your background is very noticeable... its very detailed and intricate- you should be proud!

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I feel like it needs something more in the background, in the down left corner...
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Beautiful so far.

With the cliff closest to the viewer, a litle coloured patch of small flowers might make it pop a little more, but other than that it looks great for me.

The ropes look good, the ones falling in the sky, maybe need to be lightened? I don't know they seem a little bright or how far they look like they've fallen.

The background is amazing, defintely something I would never have the patience or talent for. The boat looks really good and the addition of the birds really sets it apart. I can definately see the forests and cliffs on the other "mountains" i guess you'd call them. You can really see the variation.

Great job, can't wait to see the finished piece, and I hope this helped a little!

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I'd agree with you, but then we'd both be wrong!

It's beautiful... The background is awesome! You have definitely achieved the foresty look. But there are things that look off to me, I will try and critique:

The horse anatomy is great - the forelegs and neck look a little flat though, they are very two- tonal. Need to incorporate a bit more of the setting's light into it, maybe some soft blues and greens as highlights? Not sre about that, but something like that! And it's also the composition that's not making it as impressive as it could be - for me at least- if the horse was lower down and further to the right, it'd be awesome, though of course the you'd lose some wing.

And as for the other thing you specifically asked for... I've got no clue how to improve the rope- sorry! Maybe a different colour and more defined outlines of the twists in the rope, they look shallow now as if it were just going in and out not actually wrapping around itself. And I thnk it might look better if it were thicker?

Tis all I can come up with! I love this concept, it will be gorgeous when its done.

On the rope - yes, that's a good suggestion - think I'll also try and make some loose strands from it!! Thank you!!

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Omg! Just gorgeous! I love it!
Absolutally amazing!

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Yes, that's what I feel also - I think emphasizing the bottom knoll is the key to that, but I'm unsure of how as of yet! any ideas?

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